Category: Film

October Goals

Hello,

Thanks for the likes and follows. For October, the flowers are marigolds and cosmos. The birthstones are opal and tourmaline.

September ended, and we are all still dealing with the unexpected. An author more successful than I has a 90-day method, and she suggests a reset 4 times a year. Evaluate what works and what does not. Establish new strategies and sustain progress.

Writing update: Dead Girl Tale 2: Nox (DGT2) has been on pause for at least 2 weeks now. The change perspective method did not work as well as I hoped; instead of forcing words, I have moved back into a thinking phase for the scene. It was a little disappointing. I don’t want to tolerate setbacks, especially since DGT2 is part of a series.

This is where I tell an odd anecdote. I have multiple stories in various stages of development. I decided to be practical and look up ways to produce short stories. An excellent site for generating short story prompts is Reedsy. There are even weekly writing contests with rules and an application fee, but it’s worth it if you win or get an honorary mention. I’ve been a member since 2022, I think. So I saw a prompt and decided to write with it. I had no intention of entering a contest; my writing has not been consistent enough for that. I took the prompt and started to write, and the story fit easily into the FM Monogatari (FMM) writing project. This is a series of paranormal/urban fantasy short stories and novelettes featuring the same characters: Fayte (Fate) Devoe and Maghnus Knight. Monogatari is a Japanese word for a story. I am not an expert, and this is just a working title that I borrowed from a book I liked. I may have written about this project before. The idea has been in my mind since 2016. It’s paranormal and feels appropriate for October, and I have at least 2 complete stories for the anthology. They do need some edits, tweaks, and clean-ups, but they are in the almost-done phase of the writing process. Which was a happy surprise for me. All this time, I thought I was a mouse on a wheel, going nowhere, when in fact, progress was hiding in plain sight, or in a file folder.

This does not mean I have given up on DGT2. I will review my notes and adjust the outline to move the story where it needs to be.

Media update: The C-dramas I’ve been watching have reached the arc where the male lead and female lead have become a couple, and the real antagonist is revealing themselves. I’ve taken a break from them.

Instead, I updated my account to the streaming service Peacock and found myself rewatching the sci-fi drama Defiance and the urban fantasy Sanctuary. During the early 2000s, these were my go-to shows. In later seasons, the narratives got muddled, and I’m wondering if I was wrong. I found more problematic tropes and potential story waste. I was not aware of this before, but Peacock has produced a significant amount of original content. Some of the Peacock shows are fascinating and appropriate for October. The shows I’m going to mention for now are Girl in the Woods. It is a horror series based on the short film “Door in the Woods.” I am not a horror fan, but this felt more YA than just horror. I was intrigued to see how it would end. The other Peacock original is Vampire Academy, based on the book series by Richelle Mead. The series was considered a contemporary of the Twilight series. There was a movie that did not do well. Someone thought they could make it a TV show. Similar to what was done to The Mortal Instruments, a book series by Cassandra Clare, which became the TV show Shadowhunters. I would like to write more, but that is a post all on its own.

Goals for the month are to write 500 new words a day on the project of choice. This could mean DGT2 or FM Monogatari. I will also continue to look into writing prompts and see if I can apply them to the other story ideas and characters. I know I mentioned this before, but in the future for this website, I plan to launch a story page. The logistics of it all have yet to be finalized. The other goal is to complete the scenes in FMM and finalize the outlines of DGT2.

That is all for now. I wrote more than I planned to. This is what accountability looks like, I guess. I hope this post finds you all doing well. Don’t miss any positive opportunities and remember to be kind.

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Review #5

October Faction vs. The October Faction

the October Faction IDW

October Faction Netflix

Faction is defined as a small group dissenting in an organization. The Netflix series and the IDW publications are definitely factions of each other.

 

On January 23, 2020, Netflix premiered the October Faction. The series is created by Damian Kindler and based off of the comic or graphic novel by Steve Niles and Damien Worm.

I saw a tweet supporting the lead actress Tamara Taylor and the show, I  watched the trailer and looked forward to watching it. I am all about that supernatural/speculative fiction life, and it starred a black woman and kids. It starred Tamara Taylor and J.C. Mackenzie as the leads, Aurora Burghart and Gabriel Darku as the kids.

In my own words, this is what I understand from watching. Fred and Delores Allen hunt the supernatural, they are very good at what they do. They work for an organization called Presidio. Their kids Geoff and Viv are twins very smart children but have no idea what their parents do for a living. Fred was raised in a monster-hunting family and does not want to mess his kids up the way his parents messed him up. Delores and Fred knew each other in High School but didn’t necessarily interact with each other. After Delores’ s father, the Sheriff, was killed in “an animal” attack. They bonded. Fred’s family is all kinds of dysfunction and its malaise kind of spirals out into the whole town. The Allens are the richest people in the town of Somewhere-on-the-Hudson. Townspeople love and hate that fact.

Geoff and Viv are interesting kids. Due to the fact that they constantly move around from school to school, because of their parents’ job. They have developed two different kinds of personalities. Geoff seems to be outgoing. Viv appears cautious of her surroundings. It is easy for Geoff to make friends, for Viv not so much. However, they love and get along with their parents.

Their school life is disrupted yet again, first because of the death of Fred’s father, I forgot the name they used in the show, so I’m calling him Old Man Allen [1]. Then the fact that their parents decide to stay in the town they hate for personal reasons. Fred is facing burnout or a mid-life crisis. Delores wants to resolve her high school past. Outgoing Geoff has popularity issues and awkward Viv becomes the bait for the town’s mean girl. Adjusting to this new town and school is complicated.

Of course, not knowing the world they live in, the children unleash something dangerous and supernatural. Once Geoff and Viv realize what their parents do for a living, they become conscientious objectors. The trusts of their parents go right in the mansion’s fireplace.

There is another subplot of Old Man Allen not really being dead, the organization is turning against the Allen family. A man/machine haunting the woods of Somewhere-on-the-Hudson. Viv bonds with the creature because he saved her from a nice-guy rapist.

Mrs. Allen [1], Fred’s mother comes back into their lives. She can only be described as a sassy no-fucks-to-give older lady. It seems Fred had an older brother that died when he was a senior in high school. After that Old Man Allen forgot about his wife, he barely tolerated Fred his second son.

Secrets come to light when the dangerous supernatural turns out to be Viv and Geoff’s biological mother, a warlock. The reason Fred was hell-bent on not letting the kids know about Presidio is not only because of his shitty upbringing, but they would also be on the hunted list. It may seem that Delores wanted to tell the kids the truth and train them for their own protection.

The organization turned on the Allen family at the same time the warlock takes the kids. There is also a monster organization hunting the warlock. Delores and Fred’s hunting caught the attention of the local sheriff, a high school friend of Delores.

Things happen and what we were told at the beginning of the show is not what becomes the truth in the end. It is too much to go into detail. I have written too much as it is.

My overall opinion of the show is that it is worth watching despite the issues and threads that annoyed me. I won’t say it is binge-worthy, which is sad because I wanted it to get that binge-worthy status. I don’t think it is hated like Bright, but I don’t think it was as liked as the Umbrella Academy or Witcher. I have come across three YouTube video reviews.

Now let me tell you about The October Faction by Steve Niles and Damien Worm. It was brought to my attention because of the Netflix show. I only read volume 1. I haven’t got into the mystery that is stirring up to be exposed in future books. I enjoyed it a lot better than the Netflix show. Here are my reasons. Geoff and Viv know about their father’s previous job as a monster hunter. Fred Allan has retired from that life and he now teaches about the occult and monstrum at a college or university. He is still burned out and possibly going through a mid-life crisis. What Delores does besides raising the kids and knowing what Fred did in the past is not explained in this first book. What is explained is that there was a rut in the marriage. Delores did some unauthorized investigations that got her beat up. She unleashed a teenage boy/machine being, who wanted to kill her husband. Fred is made aware of all of this by a friend who is now a werewolf [2].

Geoff and Viv are not twins. Geoff appeared to have graduated and Viv is in her senior year of high school. She is still awkward and hates high school. These kids both know about the supernatural and they are enthusiastically interested in it. Viv still kind of bonds with the Robot face boy. It is obvious that Geoff and Viv have abilities, like being mediums and seeing dead people. Geoff has unsettling interactions with High School football star Phil or Philip [3].  Geoff can see dead people that are hanging around Phil like drapes. It seems the whole Allan family can see it.

The October Faction is a book about a family of “orphans” coming together. The Robot boy was hell-bent on killing Fred and he was fine with that. He believed he took care of a more serious threat but that is relieved to be false. There was something more sinister conspiring against the Allan family. Geoff and Viv want to be trained in the family business. They have worn Fred down and he has seemed to agree. Fred and Delores’ marriage may have been at risk but after her attack. They have seemed to mend it a bit.

The October Faction of the comic is a chosen family, who agree to work together for the family greater good.

The artwork is dark. Someone tweeted that it reminded them of Tim Burton’s films, and I have to agree. There was a macabre tone throughout the book. The living character appeared like they were sickly; they were pale and lackluster expressions. The dialogue is what kept everyone alive.

So, which is better? Honestly, I am on the fence on that issue. Both have value. In fact, one led me to the other. The Netflix show had a diverse cast. I was happy with female representation, the heroines and villainesses. I was annoyed with the whole high school representation, the tropes were overdone, awkward former friend girl to mean girl, closet gay jock. It seemed like every character has a reason for their behavior and it was the twins who got to decide what was acceptable and what was not. This could be a response to being older.

The book series may have more diversity, for women, there is only about Delores, Viv, a creepy henchwoman and her mention mother, in volume one. Fred Allan’s partner Lucas is a black man and a werewolf, and the local sheriff also looks like a black man. There is a mystery brewing and I was almost compelled me to buy volume 2, alas I had to also get things like groceries. It will be worked into my budget, next month. I will also like to see a season 2 to the Netflix October Faction.

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P.S. check out the side notes below

Side notes

  1. Old Man Allen and Mrs. Allen take on the appearance of Fred and Delores Allan of the comic book. In the comic, Fred and Delores are a white couple.
  1. In Netflix show, Fred becomes allies with a werewolf commando. In the book, this person Lucas has been Fred’s partner for years. The werewolf status did not change their friendship. Although once this friend went wolf, he retired.
  1. In the Netflix show, Geoff still had interactions with HS star Phil. The slightly tweaked it for what I can only see as diversity reasons. Geoff in the show is openly gay. Phil is in the closet. A thread was for Geoff and Phil’s relationship. Instead of Phil being responsible for something horrific, he gets to feel that he did something horrific and caused death. I have an issue with that.